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Preliminary exercise learner response

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW: There is some excellent editing here – well done! Perfect continuity editing, clear narrative communicated and a great choice of audio track that fits the message of the advert. You’ve also perfectly hit 40 seconds which is the length of each video advert in the actual brief. I particularly like a couple of your edits such as the chucking of the water bottle – seems to fit perfectly with the music! The only issue here is that the clips are the example videos we filmed in class so we don’t have any of your own original video which is a crucial part of the process. This is something to consider when choosing how to proceed with your coursework project (video or print).  EBI: In terms of the editing, the main issue is the end of the advert as you don’t have any voiceover or text on screen which is a key convention of TV advert...

Paper 1 assessment learner response

  1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). Total: 18/45 Grade: 5 www- a really strong start that shows your media knowledge and analysis skills. Now we need to add consistency to reach that level in every question. EB1- terminology (e.g. industries) , theory (narrative) and CSPs. You need detailed reference to the CSPs as evidence in your answers for the top levels. 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer. • Upper case and bold – connotations of the important, powerful message of the image and copy. • The white text against a black background and the darkness of the image makes the writing stand out and anchor the message of the text about training being important. • The brand name ‘Under armour’ has connotations of battle and war being connected to sport. 3...

Print advert pre-production: blog tasks

  1) Plan your advertising campaign: 1) What brand of health drink are you going to use? You can use an existing drink . innocent smoothie 2) New slogan for the health drink (MUST be original - cannot be existing slogan):  innocently healthy   3) Main character(s) that will appear in your adverts: me 4) Main image 1: What will your first advert look like?  The drink in a nice green field with the sun beaming and a rainbow  5) Main image 2: What will your second advert look like?   the drink overflowing with all the fruit 6) Main image 3: What will your third advert look like?  a special limited edition version of the drink with the background matching the  theme of the drink 7) What will you use for the secondary image in each advert?  the character drinking the drink split image  multiple images 8) Who will be in your adverts? only 1 character (probably me) 9) Write the 70 words that will appear on each advert - this may be informa...